The Revisions Begin.
One of the major changes I made to the the type specimen book is in regards to pages 10-11. I did not like the collage concept of page 11. It did not seem to match the cleanliness of the other pages. I decided to stick with a single image, like some on the other pages in the book. I wanted to continue cutting off the images of the girls at odd places in order to not show their entire body. My thought process is to engage the reader in the story by making them use their imagination to fill in the blanks. It fits in with the concept of my story and way the media directly drives images in the minds of viewers. Only now, I am altering the media concept by cutting off the entire image, allowing for more an exercise of fantasy than reality.
